Fern fronds frolic across the carpeted terrain of a deep-space merchandiser, the writhing corpuscles announce their unbiased censorship, and the earth sheds her misgivings like a sub-Saharan stargazer. My darling, your nonsense vaporizes my retina in a cranial conflagration reminiscent of a red giant: the hitherto hidden hope for nebulaic stardom.
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2 comments:
such brilliant language! its like a rainbow of words... certainly vaporized my retinas.
Sounds like you're moving into sci-fi!
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